The Differences between My Mom and Sister-draft 1

My mom and my sister are different in some parts. When it comes to making a decision, my mom is so purposeful that I sometimes can hardly keep up with her. However, my sister always spends much time on doing it. When getting along with people, my sister is a little shy, therefore,if you want to know her well, it will cost you a lot of time. On the other hand, my mom is very passionate. It goes without saying that she’s popular among her coworkers. As their cooking skills, my mom is innovative. She always does the dishes that she has never done before. In contrast, my sister follows the descriptions on the recipe to finish her meals. No matter how different their characters are, they are my beloved family forever.

My Favorite Season-draft 1
My favorite season is autumn.To begin with, unlike the heat in summer and the coldness in winter, the weather is very comfortable.And I always do a lot of leisure activities like fishing in such a pleasing season. In addition, I often go to the mountain behind my house to admire maples with my family,and we don't go there without having fun. Most important of all, in the end of this season, insects are preparing their food for the coming and cold winter and I can learn an inspiration is we have to save money for a rainy day.

A Unforgettable Experience/draft 2

About ten years ago,I went to polish the window as usual in school. Due to the strict rules made by my teacher,we all did so hard that we wouldn't be punished. However, something unforgettable thing occured one day. While I was polishing it, I saw there were many dusts full of the chink. Being a responsible person, I managed to clean them by twisting myself as a worm. I was proud of myself after cleaning it. But when I wanted to come out, my head got stuck between the window and rail. I was too scared to calm down, and I couldn't help but to cry. Hearing my crying, my teacher came to see what happened. She went to ask the school worker's help in a hurry after seeing my condition. Meanwhile, some of my good friends burst into tears for fear that I would die. About 10 minutes later, the school worker came to my aid. He pulled rails out and saved me. What was a close! If it had not been for his help, I would be dead then. Now, I go out with my elementary's friends to talk about the old days once in a while. Although they make fun of me for it, I don't care at all. Because in the spot, they worried about my conditon and cried from heart. I truely believe no matter what will happen in the future, they'll support me forever.

A Unforgettable Experience/draft 1
I went to polish the window as usual about 10 years ago. Due to the strict rules made by my teacher,we all did so hard that we wouldn't be punished. However, something unforgettable thing occured one day. While I was polishing it, I saw there were many dusts full of the chink. Being a responsible person, I managed to clean them by twisting myself as a worm. I was proud of myself after cleaning it. But when I wanted to come out, my head got stuck between the window and rail. I was too scared to calm down, and I couldn't help but to cry. Hearing my crying, my teacher came to see what happened. She went to ask the school worker's help in a hurry after seeing my condition. Meanwhile, some of my good friends burst into tears for fear that I would die. About 10 minutes later, the school worker came to my aid. He pulled rails out and saved me. What was a close! If it had not been for his help, I would be dead then. Now, I go out with my elementary's friends to talk about the old days once in a while. Although they make fun of me for it, I don't care at all. Because in the spot, they worried about my conditon and cried from heart. I truely believe no matter what will happen in the future, they'll support me forever.

Telling a Story (draft 2)

I live in Taipei and work as volunteer in a hospital.It really feels good to get the opportunity to help people.Yesterday morning, an old woman was sent to the emergency room because she had committed a suicide.After a long period of time, the old woman finally come off the danger. A few days later, I found that she's very lonely, because none of her relatives came to visit the sick . As a volunteer, I went to chat with her. During the chat time, I knew she was a verry shy woman, and she's always in a sad mood. However, I didn't give up and went talking to her frequently instead. In the end, we had a good frinendship as well I knew the reason that had motivated her to commit a suicide.It was her son that had abandoned her after he got married.Needless to say , I cheered her up ; therefore, she had a totally different and new attitude toward her life. Moreover, she also promised me that she would always look on the bright side of life in the future. Now, I feel even more enjoable of being a volunteer in hospital.It not only helps the patients cheer up again but also gives me a opportunity to do so .

Telling a Story (draft 1)

I live in Taipei and work as volunteer in a hospital.It really feels good to get the opportunity to help people.Yesterday morning, an old woman was sent to the emergency room because she had committed a suicide.After a long periods of time, the old woman finally come off the danger. A few days later, I found that she's very lonely, because none of he relatives came to visit the sick . As a volunteer, I went to chat with her. During the chat time, I knew she was a verry shy woman, and she's always in a sad mood. However, I didn't give up and went talking to her frequently instead. In the end, we had a good frinendship as well I knew the reason that had motivated her to commit a suicide.It was her son that had abandoned her after he got married.Needless to say , I cheered her up ; therefore, she had a totally different and new attitude toward her life. Moreover, she also promised me that she would always look the bright side of life in the future. Now, I feel even more enjoable of being a volunteer in hospital.It not only helps the patients cheer up again but also gives me a opportunity to do so .

Autobiography/2-Draft Three

In the present time, I am studying in the Department of Applied Foreign Language in Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. In the first year, I joined a Japanese club because I strongly believe learn more languages can benefit an English-learner like me; therefore I am going to take the Japanese professional test in December,2008.Moreover, when I was a second grade, I took part in the contest of decorations of bulletin board,and we got the third place. I found that one of the essential factors to win this is teamwork. Last but not the least , I took responsibility of class-leader in my first year of senior high. The experience not only made me become a confident person but also helps me know how to build up a good relationship with my classmates by communicating.I determine to keep learning language after graduating. Hopefully, I can do well on the Joint Entrance Examination to colleges and I can have a steady and high income job in the future. To sum up, all I have to do is study even harder.

Making Decisions-Draft 2

Growing up means making my own decisions. In my childhood , I didn't have to take responsibility for what I had chosen. As the time passing by, I'm not a young kid anymore. As a result, I won't regret and should be responsible for what I have decided.

The hardest decision that I ever made was whether I should go to a senior high or a commercial senior high after graduating from my junior high school. Having thought twice, I took a commercial senior high school for the choice. There are some reasons for the decision. On the one hand, my score was not good enough to enter a good public senior high school, so if I insisted on it, I had to go to a private one. However, it must be a huge burden to my family. On the other hand, I have a poor ability on math. If I chose seinor high, I would be unhappy during all of the 3 years. Hence, I entered Tainan Commercial Vacational Senior High School. I firmly believe that I won't regret my choice . The campus, teachers and classmates are marvelous, so I am delighted to walk on the right way.