An Embarrasing Experience-Draft Two

The embrassing experience will haunt me forever. It was a cold day about 7 years ago.My family and I went to my grandmother's home to get together for the coming Chinese New Year. Because of the long distances, we got there about a quarter to eleven at night. It's very late, so my mother asked me to take a bath at once. I went to the bathroom so hurry that I forgot to lock the door. Worst of all is I didn't notice that at all. At the begin, I sang very loudly to celebrate the new year, so I didn't find the door wad opening. "Oh my god,what are you doing? Close the door quickly!"When I saw my cousin, I lashed out at him. What an embrassing experience! From then on, I swear that I won't sing any songs during the time when I take a shower.

An Embarrasing Experience-Draft One

I will not forget the embrassing experience forever. It was a cold day about 7 years ago.My family and I went to my grandmother's home to get together for the coming Chinese New Year. Because of the long distances, we got there about a quarter to eleven at night. It's very late, so my mother asked me to take a bath at once. I went to the bathroom so hurry that I forget to lock the door. Worst of all, I didn't ever notice that. At the begin, I sang very loudly to celebrate the new year, so I didn't find the door wad open. "Oh my god,what are you doing? Close the door quickly!"When I saw my cousin, I lashed out at him. What an embrassing experience! From then on, I swear that I won't sing any songs during the time when I take a shower.

Hello,everyone. This is Debie. I'm 17 years old and I was born in Sinying, Tainan County. I always relax myself by listening to music.
Also, I go out with my friends on the weekend, we do some shopping, talking or whatever that is statisfied us. My dream is to have an excellent occupation in the future, so all I should do is study hard now.