Saturday, October 13, 2007

A Unforgettable Experience/draft 2
About ten years ago,I went to polish the window as usual in school. Due to the strict rules made by my teacher,we all did so hard that we wouldn't be punished. However, something unforgettable thing occured one day. While I was polishing it, I saw there were many dusts full of the chink. Being a responsible person, I managed to clean them by twisting myself as a worm. I was proud of myself after cleaning it. But when I wanted to come out, my head got stuck between the window and rail. I was too scared to calm down, and I couldn't help but to cry. Hearing my crying, my teacher came to see what happened. She went to ask the school worker's help in a hurry after seeing my condition. Meanwhile, some of my good friends burst into tears for fear that I would die. About 10 minutes later, the school worker came to my aid. He pulled rails out and saved me. What was a close! If it had not been for his help, I would be dead then. Now, I go out with my elementary's friends to talk about the old days once in a while. Although they make fun of me for it, I don't care at all. Because in the spot, they worried about my conditon and cried from heart. I truely believe no matter what will happen in the future, they'll support me forever.

Saturday, October 06, 2007

A Unforgettable Experience/draft 1
I went to polish the window as usual about 10 years ago. Due to the strict rules made by my teacher,we all did so hard that we wouldn't be punished. However, something unforgettable thing occured one day. While I was polishing it, I saw there were many dusts full of the chink. Being a responsible person, I managed to clean them by twisting myself as a worm. I was proud of myself after cleaning it. But when I wanted to come out, my head got stuck between the window and rail. I was too scared to calm down, and I couldn't help but to cry. Hearing my crying, my teacher came to see what happened. She went to ask the school worker's help in a hurry after seeing my condition. Meanwhile, some of my good friends burst into tears for fear that I would die. About 10 minutes later, the school worker came to my aid. He pulled rails out and saved me. What was a close! If it had not been for his help, I would be dead then. Now, I go out with my elementary's friends to talk about the old days once in a while. Although they make fun of me for it, I don't care at all. Because in the spot, they worried about my conditon and cried from heart. I truely believe no matter what will happen in the future, they'll support me forever.