Hello,everyone. This is Debie. I'm 17 years old and I was born in Sinying, Tainan County. I always relax myself by listening to music.
Also, I go out with my friends on the weekend, we do some shopping, talking or whatever that is statisfied us. My dream is to have an excellent occupation in the future, so all I should do is study hard now.
1 comment:
Well-done!
Add a conjunction between these 2 sentences, "I go out with my friends on the weekend, we do some shopping."
Also, "whatever that satisfies us" seems better.
Check again!
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