My Bedroom-Draft One
My bedroom is a warm place. As you enter the room, you'll find an old computer in your left. The soft bed is on the left corner. Above the bed is a window which you can see a beautiful view through it. Beside the bed are a rectangle table and a small soft sofa where I usually read newspapers and eat snacks after studying. My dresser is on the right corner next to the window. Behind the dresser is my desk where I usually study. Above the desk, I hang a nostalgic photo which was taken with my whole family. There's also a special clock which is made of wood on the left wall. I like to spend my free time in the room because of its comfortable and wonderful arrangement.
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Beside the bed are* a rectangle table and a small soft sofa where I usually read newspapers and eat snacks after studying.
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I like to spend my free time in the room because of its comfortable and wonderful arrangement. 這句because of 後面不是應該加個名詞嗎,如果是句子的話應該把of去掉吧
the soft bed is at the left corner
my dresser is at the right...
because 加子句
because of 加(N)
我覺得這句
because of its comfortable and wonderful arrangement我會改成
because it is comfortable and wonderful...
I have same opinion with the other classmates you don't have to plus "of" after because...
I like your room..perhaps I can go to visit you some day..
I have seen the comment you wrote in my blogger. Thanks your invation. I think I will visit your home on winter vacation with Vicky and Y-Ma. It must be fun.
不好意思
the soft bed is on the left corner
my dresser is on the right...
我改錯了
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