Computers-Draft 2*1~2*
Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. With the help of them, we can get the latest fashion, news and weather reports no matter when and where we need them. Also, many artists and writers can do the data collections in order that they can find the brainstorms from it. Asaid from used in works, it’s also used in entertainment. For example, we use it to do shopping not only because the price is cheaper but the speed is faster. We use it to play games, watch films, and chat with others as well. As a result, I can say there’s no doubt that we can not live without computers.
Personally, I have a liking for computers. Although it probably hurt our eyes, the computer benefits me a lot. For one thing is it can help me make more friends through the Internet. In addition, I can relax myself by listening to music, shopping or everything I like to do in my leisure time. Also, it can save much time to achieve my goals easily. But the most important factor for me is it can increase my knowledge. In such a hurried society, you’d better increase and absorb as much knowledge as you can.
2 comments:
relax myself
之前好像炒過relax
到底可不可以加反身代名詞
不過我忘了結果如何了
*上面這位同學貼錯地方了!
Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. With their help, we can get the latest fashion, news and weather reports no matter when and where we need them. Also, many artists and writers can do the data collections in order that they can find the brainstorms. Aside from being used in works, it’s also used in entertainment. For example, we use it to do the shopping because the price is cheaper and the speed is faster. We use it to play games, watch films, and chat with others as well. As a result, I firmly believe there’s no doubt that we can not live without computers.
Personally, I have a liking for computers. Although it probably hurts our eyes, the computer benefits me a lot. For one thing, it helps me make more friends through the Internet. In addition, I can relax myself by listening to music, shopping or everything I like to do in my leisure time. Also, it can save much time to achieve my goals easily. But the most important factor for me is that it can increase my knowledge. In such a society, I'd better increase and absorb as much knowledge as I can.
* 第二段結尾人稱須一致。
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