Making Decisions-Draft 1
Growing up means making my own decisions. In my childhood years, I didn't have to take responsibility for what I had chosen. As the time passing by, I'm not a girl anymore. As a result, I can't regret and should be responsible for the thing what I have decided.The hardest decision that I ever made was that I should go to a senior high or a commercial senior high after graduating from my junior high school. Thinking twice, I took a commercial senior high school for the choice. There are some reasons for the decision. On the one hand, my score was not good enough to enter a good public senior high school, so if I insisted on it, I had to go to a private one. However, it must be a huge burden to my family. On the other hand, I have a poor ability on math. If I chose seinor high, I would be unhappy all of my 3 years. As a result, I entered Tainan Commercial Vacational Senior High School. In the time being, I didn't regret my choice yet. The campus, teachers and classmates are marvelous, so I am dilighted to go to the right way.
5 comments:
As the time passing by
事不是As the time passed/went/ by
我不確定你的事不是錯誤
for the thing what I have decided.
the thing 不用寫出來
commercial senior high
用vocational 好像比較好
senior high
school最好寫出來
Good!
thinking twice 應該要接受詞
if I choose a senior high
接個school吧
第一句的years可以省略,
大概就這樣…
都說光了
你寫的都很讚
都是一些我想不的想法
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