An Embarrasing Experience-Draft One
I will not forget the embrassing experience forever. It was a cold day about 7 years ago.My family and I went to my grandmother's home to get together for the coming Chinese New Year. Because of the long distances, we got there about a quarter to eleven at night. It's very late, so my mother asked me to take a bath at once. I went to the bathroom so hurry that I forget to lock the door. Worst of all, I didn't ever notice that. At the begin, I sang very loudly to celebrate the new year, so I didn't find the door wad open. "Oh my god,what are you doing? Close the door quickly!"When I saw my cousin, I lashed out at him. What an embrassing experience! From then on, I swear that I won't sing any songs during the time when I take a shower.
5 comments:
It was very late..
that I forgot to lock..
wad open???
應該是was opened吧
Close the door quickly!",I lashed out at my cousin when I saw him....
"應該"是這樣吧?
要注意時態唷!
mother asked me to take a bath at "once".Should be "First"
At the beginning..
At the begin...我覺得應該用At the beginning
有些時態怪怪的
....I didn't find the door wad open.....
wad??應該是was 妳的Draft Two這個地方也沒改到
I didn't find the door 是was oppened
是不是Closing the door quickly!
Maybe you should check that you lock the door or not first.
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