Saturday, December 09, 2006

An Embarrasing Experience-Draft One
I will not forget the embrassing experience forever. It was a cold day about 7 years ago.My family and I went to my grandmother's home to get together for the coming Chinese New Year. Because of the long distances, we got there about a quarter to eleven at night. It's very late, so my mother asked me to take a bath at once. I went to the bathroom so hurry that I forget to lock the door. Worst of all, I didn't ever notice that. At the begin, I sang very loudly to celebrate the new year, so I didn't find the door wad open. "Oh my god,what are you doing? Close the door quickly!"When I saw my cousin, I lashed out at him. What an embrassing experience! From then on, I swear that I won't sing any songs during the time when I take a shower.

5 comments:

Sally Sun said...

It was very late..
that I forgot to lock..
wad open???
應該是was opened吧

Close the door quickly!",I lashed out at my cousin when I saw him....
"應該"是這樣吧?

Penny said...

要注意時態唷!
mother asked me to take a bath at "once".Should be "First"
At the beginning..

薪雯 said...

At the begin...我覺得應該用At the beginning
有些時態怪怪的

Anonymous said...

....I didn't find the door wad open.....

wad??應該是was 妳的Draft Two這個地方也沒改到

林小雞 said...

I didn't find the door 是was oppened
是不是Closing the door quickly!

Maybe you should check that you lock the door or not first.