Pollution-Draft One
Nowadays, pollution is more serious than before. Why? Let's discuss some reasons of pollution. The first is the higher tech. Although it is very convenient and it can save more time for us, it also causes many pollutions, such as the air pollution, the water pollution, and so on. The second is the modern products like cars and motorcycles, they surely help us arrive in the place where we wnat to go in a short time, but it does also cause the air pollution. The last one is people's selfishness, as we know, many factories would release the polluted water secretly at night,and many people go the the place which is very close to them by their own car or scooter, not only because they want to save time but they don't care about others feelings. In the long run, I want to tell everyone, in fact, many pollutions can be avoided by we humanbeings, just see if you want to do it or not.
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where we want to go..
don't forget to collect it !
"word"
the first is ...
the second is...我會用
First,.... Second,.....或
the first reason is ...
the second reason is...
people go the the place?
people go to the place
they surely help us arrive in the place
我會用
they surely help us arrive in many
places
"Although it is very convenient and it can save more time for us, it also causes many pollutions
Although our life is more conventient and we can save more time, but it causes many pollutions.
I think that is better.
people go the the place→go to the place
we humanbeings→有點怪怪的耶,寫human being就好了吧,我也不確定耶..呵
"...and many people go the the place which is very close to them by their own car or scooter,... but they don't care about others feelings. "
為什麼是they don't care about others feelings 我覺得是 they are lazy
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