A Family Argument-Draft One
Sam was born in a rich family 17 years ago. Both of his parents are in high society in Taipei. Therefore, he had been required to get the best grade in his class. Needless to say, he always achieves their goal. But this time, Sam didn't do well on his final exam. Worst of all, the report card had been sent to his father. As soon as he got home,he saw his father was sitting on the sofa, watching it with an expression of anger. Sam had no choice but to get in. His father didn't let Sam explain his reasons, and he just beat him at once. Sam was so angry that he shouted at him, "You two always care about my grades, but you never care about me!”After saying these words, Sam rushed into his room with tears. At the same time, his father was shocked by his words. From then on, they didnt talk to each other until one month passed. On the one sunny holiday, Sam's family have a family gathering as usual. On the yard, his father said,“Sam, my son, these days I've thinking the words you told me that day. I'm sorry, perhaps you're right, but I just want you to inherit my career in the future, if you don't study hard now, you will have problems on doing it.” Sam replied, ”I am sorry, dad. I have much pressure and I never think your feeling, too. Don't worry! I will find an interest to release my pressure." After this event, Sam and his family don't have any argument during his life.
Sam was born in a rich family 17 years ago. Both of his parents are in high society in Taipei. Therefore, he had been required to get the best grade in his class. Needless to say, he always achieves their goal. But this time, Sam didn't do well on his final exam. Worst of all, the report card had been sent to his father. As soon as he got home,he saw his father was sitting on the sofa, watching it with an expression of anger. Sam had no choice but to get in. His father didn't let Sam explain his reasons, and he just beat him at once. Sam was so angry that he shouted at him, "You two always care about my grades, but you never care about me!”After saying these words, Sam rushed into his room with tears. At the same time, his father was shocked by his words. From then on, they didnt talk to each other until one month passed. On the one sunny holiday, Sam's family have a family gathering as usual. On the yard, his father said,“Sam, my son, these days I've thinking the words you told me that day. I'm sorry, perhaps you're right, but I just want you to inherit my career in the future, if you don't study hard now, you will have problems on doing it.” Sam replied, ”I am sorry, dad. I have much pressure and I never think your feeling, too. Don't worry! I will find an interest to release my pressure." After this event, Sam and his family don't have any argument during his life.
6 comments:
didnt
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On the one
the 和one都是冠詞我覺得擇ㄧ即可
I've thinking ....have 後面是不是要加p.p
後面倒數幾句
I never think your feeling..
think後面要加介係詞的樣子
是of 還是about 忘記了=.=
the last sentense
sam and his family...during his life.
->during "their" lives
Amazing! You're strong in your power of imagination.I never can't do that.
你的內容真的非常豐富呢~~~
Sam's family have a family gathering as usual.
要用had喔!
超敬佩妳能想到這麼多
I like your story.
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