Wednesday, April 25, 2007

Autobiography/2-Draft One
In the present time, I am studying in Department of Applied Foreign Language in Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. In the first year, I joined a Japanese club because I believe learn more languages can benefit an English-learner like me, therefore I am going to take the Japanese professional test in December,2008.
Moreover, when I was a second grade, I took part in the contest of decorations of bulletin board, we got the third place. I found that one of the essential factors to win this is-teamwork. Last but not the least , I took responsibility class-leader in my first year of senior high. The experience not only made me become a confident person but also let me know how to build up a good relationship with my classmates by communicating.
I determined to keep learning language after graduating. Hopefully, I can do well on the Joint Extrance Examination to colleges and I can have a steady and high income job in the future. So, all I have to do is study even harder.

7 comments:

Sally Sun said...

;therefore,
a second grader
let me know 我會建議用make me know..
determine用 人 be determined 較好

Good!DB!

Estella said...

fing no mistake

邱暐心 said...

Joint E"x"→"n"trance Examination
It's just a little mistake.

Vivian said...

I can't find any mistake.

薪雯 said...

GOOD!!

Penny said...

you can the last paragraph longer.
you can tell us what you want to be and what you want to learn.

Anonymous said...

先預祝你 pass the Japanes professional test