Monday, April 16, 2007

Antobiography/1-Draft One
About 17 years ago, a cute baby was born in Sinying, Tainan county. That’s me. I’m Chou Chia-yu. There are 3 people in my family. My mother is considerate, but sometimes she is strict with me. Because I grew up in a single-parent family, she was afraid that I would be a bad guy in the future. Due to her constant efforts in raising me up, I have a personality of responsibility. My older sister is a warmhearted girl. She usually helps the blind cross the road and gives cash to beggars whenever she sees them. As for me, I’m a responsible, hard-working and fervid person. I deeply believe that I can’t achieve my goals without determination, so my motto is:”Where there is a way, there is a will.”
I like singing and learning something new in my free time. Singing songs can release my pressure, so I used to be a member in the singing member at school. Besides, I like to learn new things,such as designing homepage,for it can help me absorb the latest information in this society. On the other hand, I also do some outdoor activities like badminton, basketball and volleyball. Although I am not real good at them, I will try my best to practice, because they are the best channel for me to relax myself well.

6 comments:

Sally Sun said...

On the other hand
我建議用in addition或furthmore..
because部用加逗號
good~Debie you are really outstanding

Penny said...

That’s me.(時態用過去式會不會比較好?!)
是strick with還是to啊?!
用guy比較有男生的意味
你要不要用girl?

Anonymous said...

是strict with 沒錯(查過了)
終於不是閃亮亮的顏色了

Estella said...

你的字好抖喔-.-

because 前不加逗號.
I used to be a member in the singing member

找看看有沒有可以替代的字吧
好多member...

邱暐心 said...

I know more things about you now, Debbie.

Vivian said...

看完頭好暈呀~~~
斜體看來真的不太舒服